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Jack Frost by RandomDraggon Jack Frost by RandomDraggon
I TRIED OK. THIS LOOKS SO WEIRD AND UHG. At least his hair and frost looks spiffy. -ded-
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:iconkairixsora101:
I think this looks amazing~! XD I love the texture look you put for his outfit. Also great job on the shading. It bring out Jack's hair and his emotion in the photo. Also you did great on the tones for the hair. The only thing that is a little off is his smile but other than that I think you did great! I also like your vision of Jack. His eyes compel the watcher like what is he going to do next. The snow you did also for his sleeves is amazing! It looks so real like I could really touch it!!!!!! Amazing job, Random Draggon! =^.^=
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The only thing I will say is really off is the mouth. From an actress point of view, not an artists, expression is what counts. From seeing the movie he can give a real smile, but it's usually smaller, this is too big, and in fact something close to a smirk would be more appropriate? Just saying.

And his eyes could use some shading depth in the whites. Make them look less a solid plain of white and and shading around the edges to make it looked curved around back to the head, would look good. Them Iris's though. MMMMM~
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FurnarchyDevil Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome, first off. I really enjoy your way of shading, and the way you did the frost on his jacket. However, The shading. It seems like for each piece of this, (Skin, hair, Jacket) You used a different shading technique rather than sticking to just one which makes it a little less realistic. (Ireallylikehishair;-;) His smile seems a bit off, like Krystal previously stated. And I think that if you would get rid of the black outlines, it would look even better because black seems to flatten out a drawing, especially when you trace the finished lineart with it. You did really nice on the contours of his face, by the way. :)
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RandomDraggon Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student General Artist
X3 thank you! You should comment on my things more, I love critiques~
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FurnarchyDevil Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I will! You're welcome n.n
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RandomDraggon Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student General Artist
:3
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knuxfan23 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
THIS LOOKS GREAT


i agree with the critique below,thats the only thing i can see wrong

amazing shading,just amazing

love the snowy design on his jacket too~
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DeeBlooStarGurl Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing! :)
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TsukiyomiNekoMiku Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are too good at drawing draggon~!! >w<b
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RandomDraggon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
aw thanks !
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TsukiyomiNekoMiku Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe, your welcome~!!! >w< :iconaawplz:
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KrystalDulceHex Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow Dax wow! I love it so much you have no idea. And the frost is fantastic! It sparkles! ;3

I can't wait to see this movie again.
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